Couples head to that wooden boat.
Loved ones watch on with water at their ankles and in their eyes.
Still, they're blood will live on forever.
But I am just a unicorn.
And my mate ran off with the centaur. ;D
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this is cute but confusing. maybe you meant it to be that way? for some reason i pictured titanic. idk. i know you like to explain your writing. so here...go!
Couples head to that wooden boat. (Noah's Ark) Loved ones watch on with water at their ankles and in their eyes. (It's started raining so theres water at their ankles. They cry bc they know theyre about to die.) Still, they're blood will live on forever. (There are 2 of each animal so their lineage will not cease.) But I am just a unicorn. And my mate ran off with the centaur. (You see neither unicorns or centaurs nowadays! So that's my explanation for what happened to them.)
It's supposed to be funny. Like "Oh that's why there is no unicorns! The male unicorn stood the female unicorn up at the ark! HAHAHAHAHAHA" But I also kinda wrote it at a time I felt like everyone is gonna get married and pair up but me. So I'm just a lone unicorn whose prince charming must have knocked on the wrong castle door.
4 comments:
this is cute but confusing. maybe you meant it to be that way? for some reason i pictured titanic. idk. i know you like to explain your writing. so here...go!
Couples head to that wooden boat.
(Noah's Ark)
Loved ones watch on with water at their ankles and in their eyes.
(It's started raining so theres water at their ankles. They cry bc they know theyre about to die.)
Still, they're blood will live on forever.
(There are 2 of each animal so their lineage will not cease.)
But I am just a unicorn.
And my mate ran off with the centaur.
(You see neither unicorns or centaurs nowadays! So that's my explanation for what happened to them.)
It's supposed to be funny. Like "Oh that's why there is no unicorns! The male unicorn stood the female unicorn up at the ark! HAHAHAHAHAHA" But I also kinda wrote it at a time I felt like everyone is gonna get married and pair up but me. So I'm just a lone unicorn whose prince charming must have knocked on the wrong castle door.
interesting. i like. dark humor. well, nolt dark humor. but sad humor, perhaps? very chuck pallahinunksdkjfhjhsdfk.
you know i love chuck palahniuksdkshdfkl.
also, anonymous is synonymous with sosina.
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